Changeset 3c234eb

Timestamp:

Dec 24, 2008, 6:38:56 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

d31ff94

Parents:

45b0ed5

Message:

Text fixes

Location:

BOOK/final-system

Files:

• alpha/aboot.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• common/bison.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• ppc64/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/alpha/aboot.xml

@@ -69 +69 @@
         <term><command>e2writeboot</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Can  be  used  to write a secondary bootstrap loader to an
+          <para>Can be used to write a secondary bootstrap loader to an
           ext2 formatted filesystem (normally on a floppy disk).</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-aboot e2writeboot">

BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="b1">The configure system causes bison to be built without support
+    <para os="b1">The configure system causes Bison to be built without support
     for internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
     program is not already in $PATH.  The following addition will correct

BOOK/final-system/ppc64/binutils.xml

@@ -59 +59 @@
 
     <para os="ac">The following patch corrects an error in the visibility
-    tests for <command>ld</command> which only affects ppc64, see <ulink
-    url="http://sourceware.org/ml/binutils/2004-08/msg00030.html"/>.</para>
+    tests for <command>ld</command> which only affects ppc64 (see <ulink
+    url="http://sourceware.org/ml/binutils/2004-08/msg00030.html"/>):</para>
 
 <screen os="ad"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-ppc64-vistest-patch;</userinput></screen>