Changeset 3a86839 for BOOK/introduction/common

Timestamp:

Sep 2, 2006, 10:51:06 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

15962fe

Parents:

e6554e3f

Message:

Text updates.

File:

• BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml

@@ -65 +65 @@
  <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisted in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
+      <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisting in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
@@ -78 +78 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge people who
-have supported, spotted needed corrections, and testing of the cross-lfs book
-via the CLFS-DEV Mailing lists.</para>
+  <para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge contributions of people
+  from <ulink url="clfs-dev@lists.cross-lfs.org"/> and associated mailing lists
+  who have provided valuable technical and editorial corrections while testing
+  the Cross-LFS book.</para>
 
  <itemizedlist>