Changeset 39139e4 for BOOK/final-system

Timestamp:

Apr 18, 2006, 8:47:16 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

54d004a8

Parents:

c705c5d

Message:

r2948@server (orig r1405): chris | 2006-04-18 07:39:00 -0700
Minor text/grammar updates.

Location:

BOOK/final-system

Files:

• common/bison.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• common/gcc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• common/glibc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• x86_64-64/glibc.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/bison.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
     for internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
     program is not already in $PATH.  The following addition will correct
-    this.</para>
+    this:</para>
 
 <screen os="b2"><userinput>echo '#define YYENABLE_NLS 1' >> config.h</userinput></screen>  

BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml

@@ -36 +36 @@
 
     <para os="p1">The following patch fixes an issue where gcc doesn't generate
-    some code properly.</para>
+    some code properly:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-fold_const-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -49 +49 @@
     <para os="e1">GCC provides a <command>gccbug</command> script which detects at
     compile time whether mktemp is present, and hardcodes the result in a test.
-    This will cause the script to fall back to using less random names for
-    temporary files.  We will be installing mktemp later, so the following sed
-    will simulate its presence.</para>
+    If mktemp is not found, the script will fall back to using less
+    random names for temporary files.  We will be installing mktemp
+    later, so the following sed will simulate its presence:</para>
 
 <screen os="e2"><userinput>sed -i 's/@have_mktemp_command@/yes/' gcc/gccbug.in</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml

@@ -55 +55 @@
     of achieving a clean build.</para>
 
-    <para os="c">The following patch removes the potential of localdef
-    segfaulting:</para>
+    <para os="c">The following patch fixes an issue that can
+    cause <command>localdef</command> to segfault:</para>
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&glibc-localedef_segfault-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -63 +63 @@
     will prevent nscd from trying to link to libraries that don't exist:</para>
 
-<screen os="s2"><userinput>cp nscd/Makefile{,.orig}
+<screen os="s2"><userinput>cp -v nscd/Makefile{,.orig}
 sed -e "/nscd_stat.o: sysincludes = # nothing/d" nscd/Makefile.orig > \
-nscd/Makefile</userinput></screen>
+    nscd/Makefile</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="e">The Glibc documentation recommends building Glibc outside of the

BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/glibc.xml

@@ -129 +129 @@
     /usr/bin/ldd</command> script - if you look at this, you will see it references
     not only the 32-bit linker, but also /lib64 where it thinks the 64-bit linker
-    is. The following <command>sed</command> will correct this.</para>
+    is. The following <command>sed</command> will correct this:</para>
 
     <screen><userinput>rm -v /lib/ld-linux.so.2