Changeset 35b75e6

Timestamp:

Jul 17, 2006, 9:25:42 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

f933d85

Parents:

07621da

Message:

Text fixes

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/askforhelp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• materials/common/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• materials/common/patches.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• packages.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• patches.ent (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/general.ent

@@ -33 +33 @@
 <!ENTITY clfs-wiki "http://trac.cross-lfs.org/">
 <!ENTITY blfs-root "&lfs-root;blfs/">
-<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-root;wiki/faq">
+<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-wiki;wiki/faq">
 <!ENTITY hints-root "&lfs-root;hints/downloads/files/">
 <!ENTITY hints-index "&lfs-root;hints/list.html">

BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml

@@ -69 +69 @@
       mean that we will not help you. After all, the CLFS project is
       about personal preference. Be upfront about any changes to
-      the established procedure, this helps us evaluate and determine
+      the established procedure—this helps us evaluate and determine
       possible causes of your problem.</para>
     </note>

BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
   most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
   alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
-  url="http://cross-lfs.org/files/packages/&major-version;.&minor-version;.&extra-version;"/>.</para>
+  url="&packages-root;"/>.</para>
 
   <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
@@ -42 +42 @@
 <screen><userinput>mkdir -v $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. <quote>Sticky</quote>
-  means that even if multiple users have write permission on a
-  directory, only the owner of a file can delete the file within a
-  sticky directory. The following command will enable the write and
-  sticky modes:</para>
+  <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. When a directory is
+  marked <quote>sticky</quote>, that means that even if multiple users have
+  write permission on that directory, any file within that directory can only be
+  deleted or modified by its owner. The following command will enable the
+  write and sticky modes:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>chmod -v a+wt $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>

BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml

@@ -15 +15 @@
   fixed by the maintainer. The patches also make small modifications to
   make the packages easier to work with. The following patches will be
-  needed to build an CLFS system:</para>
+  needed to build a CLFS system:</para>
 
   <variablelist role="materials">

BOOK/packages.ent

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
-<!ENTITY packages-root "http://cross-lfs.org/files/packages/&generic-version;/">
+<!ENTITY packages-root "&clfs-root;files/packages/&generic-version;/">
 
 <!-- Note: For empty *-home entities use " " not "" -->

BOOK/patches.ent

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
-<!ENTITY patches-root "http://cross-lfs.org/files/patches/&generic-version;/">
+<!ENTITY patches-root "&clfs-root;files/patches/&generic-version;/">
 
 <!-- Start of Common Patches -->