Changeset 33125aa in clfs-embedded for BOOK


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Timestamp:
Sep 22, 2012, 11:44:54 AM (12 years ago)
Author:
Andrew Bradford <andrew@…>
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part/intro: Grammar fixup

Signed-off-by: Andrew Bradford <andrew@…>

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  • BOOK/partitioning/common/introduction.xml

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    1515  on it, and mount it.</para>
    1616
    17   <para>In some circumstances based on the platform your building for this
    18   step can be skipped.</para>
     17  <para>In some circumstances, based on the platform you're building for,
     18  this step can be skipped.</para>
    1919
    2020</sect1>
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