Changeset 30f556b

Timestamp:

May 30, 2006, 5:06:53 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

668de79

Parents:

97475d9

Message:

r3762@server (orig r1702): chris | 2006-05-30 15:29:30 -0700
Text updates

Files:

• chroot/common/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/x86/grub.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chroot/common/introduction.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>This chapter shows how to prepare a <command>chroot</command>
-  jail to build the final system packages into it.</para>
+  jail to build the final system packages into.</para>
 
 </sect1>

final-system/x86/grub.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title>Installation of GRUB</title>
 
-   <para os="p1">Sometimes grub under Linux 2.6 doesn't detect the disk geometry correctly,
-   which will result in an error message. The error message is
-   Error 24: Attempt to access block outside partition. The following patch fixes this issue:</para>
+   <para os="p1">GRUB has an issue where it sometimes doesn't detect
+   the disk geometry correctly when used with Linux 2.6. This results
+   in the error message <literal>Error 24: Attempt to access block outside
+   partition<literal>. The following patch fixes this issue:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grub-disk-patch;</userinput></screen>

introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
                         in util-linux.</para>
         </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[Chris] - Removed the long-gone swapdev program from
+          the list of programs installed by util-linux, and several
+          programs not installed by default from the kbd program list.</para>
+        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>