Changeset 2ed9444 for prologue/common

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 2:25:29 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

2f1c8cb

Parents:

fbbe3fe

Message:

r1157@server (orig r1155): chris | 2006-02-07 20:52:55 -0800
Added section on package management, and various other text fixes

File:

• prologue/common/organization.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

prologue/common/organization.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
 
     <para>Part III shows you how to make a set of Cross-Compiler
-          tools. These tools allow you make a set of tools
-          that will run on your host system, but will allow
-          you to cross-build packages for your target system.</para>
+          tools. These tools can run on your host system but allow you to
+          build packages that will run on your target system.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -42 +41 @@
     <title>Part IV - Building the Basic Tools</title>
 
-    <para>Part IV explains how to build a tool chain built
+    <para>Part IV explains how to build a tool chain designed
           to operate on your target system. These are the tools
           that will allow you to build a working system on your 
-          target host.</para>
+          target computer.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -65 +64 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
-    <para>TEXT NEEDED.</para>
+    <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
+    anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
+    terms used in the book, and Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
+    have helped work on the LFS project and website.</para>
 
   </sect2>