Changeset 24213983 for BOOK/final-system

Timestamp:

Jan 19, 2014, 12:21:44 PM (11 years ago)

Author:

William Harrington <kb0iic@…>

Branches:

clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

9d17a08d

Parents:

d799833

Message:

Change text where required to Systemd rather than systemd to be consistent wtih the rest of the book. Adjust Systemd introduction text to be a bit consistent to the rest of the book's introduction to packages.

Location:

BOOK/final-system/common

Files:

• kbd.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• systemd.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

BOOK/final-system/common/kbd.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
 <screen os="g"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="h">Some of the programs from Kbd are used by systemd to
+    <para os="h">Some of the programs from Kbd are used by Systemd to
     initialize the system, those binaries need to be on the root
     partition:</para>

BOOK/final-system/common/systemd.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="systemd.html"?>
 
-  <title>systemd-&systemd-version;</title>
+  <title>Systemd-&systemd-version;</title>
 
   <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd">
@@ -17 +17 @@
     <title/>
 
-    <para><command>systemd</command> is a system and service manager for Linux
+    <para>The Systemd package is a system and service manager for Linux
     operating systems.</para>
 
@@ -25 +25 @@
     <title>Installation of systemd</title>
 
-    <para os="a">Prepare systemd for compilation:</para>
+    <para os="a">Prepare Systemd for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr \
@@ -65 +65 @@
 
   <sect2 id="conf-systemd" role="configuration">
-    <title>Configuring systemd</title>
+    <title>Configuring Systemd</title>
 
     <indexterm zone="conf-systemd">
@@ -102 +102 @@
 
   <sect2 id="contents-systemd" role="content">
-    <title>Contents of systemd</title>
+    <title>Contents of Systemd</title>
 
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -126 +126 @@
         <term><command>systemctl</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Control the systemd system and service manager</para>
+          <para>Control the Systemd system and service manager</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd systemctl">
             <primary sortas="b-systemctl">systemctl</primary>
@@ -188 +188 @@
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">pam_systemd</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Register user sessions in the systemd control group
+          <para>Register user sessions in the Systemd control group
           hierarchy</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-systemd pam_systemd">