Changeset 1c514e4 for BOOK/prologue/common

Timestamp:

Jul 22, 2006, 12:12:31 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

cc40a6f

Parents:

2254d84

Message:

r4748@server: jim | 2006-07-22 12:11:39 -0700
Text Updates.

File:

• BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
   <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
   level of skill, the various CLFS support forums are unlikely to be able to
-  provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
-  such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-  to the CLFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
+  provide you with much assistance. Your questions regarding such basic knowledge
+  will likely go unanswered, or you will be referred to the CLFS essential
+  pre-reading list.</para>
 
   <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
@@ -49 +49 @@
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is an hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an