Changeset 173da18 for BOOK

Timestamp:

Apr 14, 2006, 12:25:12 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

035fb6f

Parents:

cba7feb9

Message:

r2886@server (orig r1382): chris | 2006-04-14 08:51:59 -0700
Text updates and grammar fixes

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• boot/common/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• cross-tools/common/glibc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• temp-system/common/bash.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/boot/common/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter shows how to complete the temporary tools to create
-  a minimal system that will be used to boot the target machine and to build
-  the final system packages.</para>
+  <para>This chapter shows how to complete the build of temporary tools to
+  create a minimal system that will be used to boot the target machine and to
+  build the final system packages.</para>
 
   <para>There are a few additional packages that will need to be
-installed to allow you to boot the minimal system. Most of these
-packages will be installed onto the root or in /usr on the LFS
-partition ($LFS/bin, $LFS/usr/lib, etc...), rather than /tools.
-However, since you are still installing these packages from the host
-system, these packages will need to be installed using the "DESTDIR"
-option with make.</para>
-
-<para>More detailed info about DESTDIR needed here...</para>
-
-<para>Also, since you will need to create directories and install
-packages in them in $LFS (and of course don't want to use root to do
-this, to avoid damage to the host system), outside of /tools and
-/cross-tools, you will need to temporarily change the ownership of
-$LFS to the <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem> user. Run
-the following command as <systemitem
-class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
+  installed to allow you to boot the minimal system. Some of these
+  packages will be installed onto the root or in /usr on the LFS
+  partition ($LFS/bin, $LFS/usr/lib, etc...), rather than /tools, using the
+  "DESTDIR" option with make. This will require the
+  <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem> user to have write access to
+  the rest of the $LFS partition, so you will need to temporarily change the
+  ownership of $LFS to the <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem> user.
+  Run the following command as <systemitem
+  class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>chown -v lfs $LFS</userinput></screen>

BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='d'])"/>
 
-    <para os="s1">The following sed fixes a build issue with Glibc, this will prevent nscd from trying
-to link to libraries, that don't exist:</para>
+    <para os="s1">The following sed fixes a build issue with Glibc. This will
+    prevent nscd from trying to link to libraries that don't exist:</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>cp nscd/Makefile{,.orig}

BOOK/temp-system/common/bash.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
    Makefile.in.orig > Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="c1">Remove a test that causes the build to fail::</para>
+    <para os="c1">Remove a test that causes the build to fail:</para>
 
 <screen os="c2"><userinput>echo "ac_cv_func_setvbuf_reversed=no" >> config.cache</userinput></screen>
@@ -42 +42 @@
 
     <variablelist os="ad">
-      <title>The meaning of the configure options:</title>
+      <title>The meaning of the configure option:</title>
 
       <varlistentry>