Changeset 155e089

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 2:06:08 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

e26050d

Parents:

3234791

Message:

r1036@server (orig r1034): chris | 2006-01-10 05:02:53 -0800
Minor changes to several package instructions

Files:

• boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/gcc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/inetutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/shadow.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/sysklogd.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• the-end/reboot.xml (modified) (1 diff)

boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -56 +56 @@
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
     href="../../final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml"
-    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='h'])"/>
-
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
-    href="../../final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='i'])"/>
 

final-system/common/binutils.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>Bash, Coreutils, Diffutils, Expect, GCC, Gettext,
+        <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Expect, GCC, Gettext,
         Glibc, Grep, Make, Patch, Perl, Sed, Tcl, and Texinfo</seg>
       </seglistitem>

final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
     <title>Installation of E2fsprogs</title>
 
-    <para os="a">It is recommended that E2fsprogs be built in a subdirectory of
-    the source tree:</para>
+    <para os="a">The E2fsprogs documentation recommends that the package be
+    built in a subdirectory of the source tree:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>mkdir build

final-system/common/gcc.xml

@@ -206 +206 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>The libmudflap libraries are used by GCC for instrumenting
-          pointer and array defreferncing operations.</para>
+          pointer and array dereferencing operations.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-gcc libmudflap">
             <primary sortas="c-libmudflap*">libmudflap*</primary>

final-system/common/inetutils.xml

@@ -34 +34 @@
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed.
+    <para os="p1">Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed.
     However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the
     man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this

final-system/common/shadow.xml

@@ -52 +52 @@
 <screen os="c"><userinput>./configure --libdir=/lib --enable-shared</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="d">Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command> program
-    and it's man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
+    <para os="d">Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command>
+    program and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
 
 <screen os="e"><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile

final-system/common/sysklogd.xml

@@ -115 +115 @@
           Every logged message contains at least a date stamp and a hostname,
           and normally the program's name too, but that depends on how
-          trusting the logging daemon is told to be</para>
+          trusting the logging daemon is told to be.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysklogd syslogd">
             <primary sortas="b-syslogd">syslogd</primary>

testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>GCC and Coreutils</seg>
+        <seg>Coreutils, GCC, and Make</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>

the-end/reboot.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Then unmount the virtual files systems:</para>
+  <para>Then unmount the virtual file systems:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS/dev/pts