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   <para>The CLFS system will be built by using a previously installed
-  Unix system or Linux distribution (such as Debian, Fedora, openSUSE,
+  Unix system or Linux distribution (such as Debian, Fedora, Mandriva, SUSE,
   or Ubuntu). This existing system (the host) will be used as a starting
   point to provide necessary programs, including a compiler, linker, and shell,
@@ -48 +48 @@
 
   <para>The process of building cross-compile tools first involves building and
-  installing all the necessary tools to create a build system for the target
+  installing all the necessary tools to create a build system for the target 
   machine. With these cross-compiled tools, we eliminate any
   dependencies on the toolchain from our host distro.</para>
 
   <para>After we build our <quote>Cross-Tools</quote>, we start building
-  a very minimal working system in
-  <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>. This minimal system will be
-  built using the cross-toolchain in
-  <filename class="directory">/cross-tools</filename>.</para>
+  a very minimal working system in /tools. This minimal system will be built
+  using the cross-toolchain in /cross-tools.</para>
 
   <para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, the full CLFS system is
@@ -76 +74 @@
   support the target machine. Booting involves installing a few
   additional packages that are needed for bootup, installing
-  boot-scripts, and building a miminal kernel.<!-- We also describe some
-  alternative booting methods in <xref linkend="ch-boot-whatnext"/> --></para>
+  bootscripts, and building a miminal kernel. We also describe some
+  alternative booting methods in <xref linkend="ch-boot-whatnext"/></para>
 
   <para>To finish the installation, several configuration files are created in
-  <xref linkend="chapter-system-config"/>, and the kernel and boot loader are set
+  <xref linkend="chapter-bootscripts"/>, and the kernel and boot loader are set
   up in <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. <xref linkend="chapter-finalizing"/>
   contains information on furthering the CLFS experience beyond this book.