Changeset 0220731 for BOOK/temp-system/common

Timestamp:

May 17, 2006, 1:18:45 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

766ee22

Parents:

a8f30b25

Message:

r3559@server (orig r1624): chris | 2006-05-17 10:47:43 -0700
More text updates

Location:

BOOK/temp-system/common

Files:

• introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• variables.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/temp-system/common/introduction.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
   <para>This chapter shows how to compile and install a minimal Linux
   system. This system will contain just enough tools to start
-  constructing the final LFS system in <xref
+  constructing the final CLFS system in <xref
   linkend="chapter-building-system"/> and allow a working environment
   with more user convenience than a minimum environment would.</para>
 
-  <para>The tools in this chapter are cross-compiled using the toolchain in /cross-tools. The files compiled in this chapter will be installed under the
+  <para>The tools in this chapter are cross-compiled using the toolchain in
+  /cross-tools and will be installed under the
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> directory to keep
   them separate from the files installed in <xref
   linkend="chapter-building-system"/> and the host production directories.
   Since the packages compiled here are temporary, we do not want them to
-  pollute the soon-to-be LFS system.</para>
+  pollute the soon-to-be CLFS system.</para>
 
   <para>Check one last time that the <envar>LFS</envar> environment
@@ -29 +30 @@
 <screen><userinput>echo $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the LFS partition's mount
+  <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the CLFS partition's mount
   point, which is <filename class="directory">/mnt/lfs</filename>, using
   our example.</para>

BOOK/temp-system/common/variables.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Build Variables</title>
 
-  <para>Setup target specific variables for the compiler
+  <para>Setup target-specific variables for the compiler
   and linkers:</para>