Changeset 00c8a02 in clfs-embedded for BOOK

Timestamp:

Nov 26, 2006, 5:45:55 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

14bbd61

Parents:

24e0008

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• bootloaders/common/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• cross-tools/common/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• cross-tools/common/clear-toolchain.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• cross-tools/common/gcc-static.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/busybox.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/bootloaders/common/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para os="a">Since Every Embedded Architecture has a different type of
-  bootloader, we will discuss how to configuration them in this section.</para>
+  <para os="a">Since every embedded architecture has a different type of
+  bootloader, we will discuss how to configure them in this section.</para>
 
 </sect1>

BOOK/cross-tools/common/binutils.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-posix-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="p3">Now since we using uClibc, we need to patch binutils to recognize
-    this fact:</para>
+    <para os="p3">The following patch is needed for Binutils to build against
+    uClibc:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&binutils-uclibc-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/cross-tools/common/clear-toolchain.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>Now we remove the toolchain variables to prevent
-  then final GCC build from having issues:</para>
+  the final GCC build from having issues:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><literal>unset CC

BOOK/cross-tools/common/gcc-static.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-posix-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="p3">Now since we using uClibc, we need to patch GCC to recognize
-    this fact:</para>
+    <para os="p3">The following patch is needed for GCC to build against uClibc:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-uclibc-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/busybox.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
     <title>Installation of Busybox</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The follow patches fixes some issues that are related to the
-    headers we are using. To correct this issues apply the following patch:</para>
+    <para os="p1">The following patch fixes some issues that are related to the
+    headers we are using:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&busybox-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="a">Create default configuration:</para>
+    <para os="a">Create the default configuration:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>make defconfig</userinput></screen>